‘utilitarianism’ ethics essay (need revise)

This assignment title is ‘Social impact analysis’, I write the first draft.

I need help to fix a grammatical error, sentences, and paraphrase.

Also, this assignment requires that you have knowledge of ethics theory, especially Utilitarianism.

You will have my first draft, and feedback from my instructor that you need to follow up.

It is for ‘Engineering ethics‘ class.